Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Captain's Log Stardate 9282016: My Epilogue to the Martian Chronicles by Ray Bradbury

Epilogue:


The sun set upon the finest apartment in the finest building of the dead city. The sounds of dinner being prepared, the pots being filled with boiling water and rations being boiled to stew, rang out in the dead air. Not quite dead: in the other streets of the city were nine other apartments lit up, hustle and bustle.
“Mom, can I have some more stew?”, asked Texas.
“Of course, honey.” said Julia, their mother.
Later that night, Texas and his twin sister Brazil, went out in the red sands to explore. There was always something to find among the crumbling houses scattered across the deserts. They found pots and pans, dolls and pencils, shovels and pictures. Who left all of this here?, they would wonder some days.  But they did not think too hard along this train of thought, because there was no one here now and this was their playscape.
Washington, their older brother, stayed behind to continue his education with his mother.  Among other things, she taught him the history of Earth. Washington understood that his grandparents had come from Earth, that it was a little planet many miles away, and that he would never see Earth in person. Mars was his home.
“The Civil War was fought over slavery. People were being treated like livestock... remember what livestock are? Yes, so anyway, the Confederates wanted to keep their slaves and the Union wanted there to only be free people.”
Washington asked, “Why did the confederates want to make other people work for them?”
Julia, pausing for a moment, said, “they weren’t the only ones.  Slavery was very common in this time period in earth and it continued even when your grandfather Tim was alive.  It’s all about greed, and money.  People on earth would do a lot for greed and money, including treating other people badly. Of course, we don’t have money now.  We just share what we have and we’re still alive, so it’s worked out, hasn’t it?”
“I guess so.”
“We’re done for tonight, honey. Could you go get Tex and Brazil in a few minutes?”
Washington climbed down the staircase, spiraling on and on until he reached the floor.  Walking out onto the sands that had blown over where the city roads used to be, Washington walked into the desert to look for his sister and brother.  He knew he would find them soon enough.  Their screams of delight at all the toys they found could be heard from far away.  As he trudged along absent-mindedly, Washington thought of Earth.
Why had they all been so silly?  Why had they fought one another?  Why had they always argued about their differences?  Why did they think that people of different skin colors or women or those of different religions were that different from them? Washington felt that if he had been in charge of Earth, he probably could have done a better job then all the supposedly brilliant people that had run the planet.  
The sun was setting, making the sand shimmer like his mom had described the oceans on Earth. And why did they always use up too much of their wood or their coal or their oil or their water and fight over what was left?  Didn’t they see the end coming?  Didn’t they know that their water should have lasted them forever?
He heard them.  They were over there, in that little Martian House.  He walked up to the house, calling “it’s time to come home!”  Their little heads popped out of the house, followed by their running bodies. Soon they were at his side, panting and laughing as they tickled each other.  Washington thought, “what the Earth men would think of us?  Did they know that this was all you needed?”  

7 comments:

  1. I love it that you did some creative writing here! Feel free to do that with as many blog posts as you like, by the way.

    -Shout-out to place names. Yay! I'm thinking about last class's discussion about our re-naming the Martian places. This, plus the emphasis on history, also make me wonder if you're jumping off of "Way Up in the Middle of the Air"--are these the descendants of slaves?

    I know you didn't have much time to write this, but I love how tied in it is with so many pieces of The Martian Chronicles.

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  2. Really good. I was engaged from the very beginning. I like that you used Earth locations as names, it was an interesting choice. I agree with the "why" questions that you asked. Humans should understand that there's more that stems from connection and environmental consciousness versus becoming resource wasters.

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  3. I love the names lol. And I really liked the ending. It was really cute and innocent and stoof. And yeah to a different species (I'm guessing?) our human problems are so irrelevant and silly.

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  4. I really liked how you made all the Martians have Earth place names

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  5. I haven't seen all of the blog posts from this round yet, but this seems to be the first blog post that was actually a written story, and it's actually a good story, which makes it even better. This honestly seems like it could almost go in the actual book.

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  6. I really like the parallelism between earth after the bombings and mars after the disease. I don't know if you did that on purpose, but either way it's a great full circle moment.

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